This is a strong first draft with a striking cover image. I can see that you have referenced existing materials; we just need to tweak a few elements: - Make the cover lines on the left bigger and bolder - Pick a less neon green for the text - Add some more text re. Cantata (under where it says Cantata), e.g., why is it on the cover? - Change the blue and grey boxes to the non-neon green to tie it all together
Emma,
ReplyDeleteThis is a strong first draft with a striking cover image. I can see that you have referenced existing materials; we just need to tweak a few elements:
- Make the cover lines on the left bigger and bolder
- Pick a less neon green for the text
- Add some more text re. Cantata (under where it says Cantata), e.g., why is it on the cover?
- Change the blue and grey boxes to the non-neon green to tie it all together
Great start,
EllieB